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La La La La La Laa by ~TheLoneFool:iconTheLoneFool:

Categories Literature > Prose > Non-Fiction > Satire


I'm terrified of letting you in.

I'm shaking just thinking about

It.

                                                                               Humans are so cruel.

                                                                                      Humans are so kind.


Masquerade... paper faces on parade... masquerade.

Hide your face so the world will never find you.

Don't come near me.

Stay away.

I am worthless        I am nothing
I am weakness                                       I am strength
I am darkness                                                                          I am light

I am lonely.

I

am

nothing.


                                                             la la la la laa la...

                               ...la la la la laa...    

                                                                                            la la la la laa la
       
    ...la la la laaa.   


Did you say something?

huh

Did I?

Did...

Did you hear about the car crash? They say she died instantly...
Did you hear the news? She burned to death.

She was killed by a rapist
Killed by a friend
They say she shot her own self upside the head.

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall. Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.
And all the king's horses and all the king's men

Couldn't put Humpty together again.      ...meaningless, meaningless, all is meaningless.

Fabricated lies
Fabricated smiles

Don't come closer. I've closed away my heart.

Help me.

I've fallen and I can't get up.
©2009-2010 ~TheLoneFool
:iconthelonefool:

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The first 17 seconds if you please. Explanatory you see. (plus the sure genius of the composer for how creepy a la la laa can get)

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~RandomSpiritLover716 Feb 2, 2009, 3:09:10 PM
O____O this is SO cool.
I love the flow of everything and the inserts of other common lyrics or poems.


++++++++++FAAAAAAAAAAAAV!

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Blogging: Never have so many with so little to say said so much to so few.
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~lookingatthepieces Feb 2, 2009, 3:58:58 PM
I love this the way you spaced out everything. It just has a very creepy undertone to it and I think it's great. Also I totally relate with everything being completely meaningless.

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"When you're bored why not do something you can't do just because you can?"
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~smiley975 Feb 2, 2009, 4:41:31 PM
The words were so artistically placed and the way you set it up was so perfect for the effect and surprisingly enough I was picturing the creepy la's from hell girl before I even read the description. Honestly you have the ability to twist any words you want to make them fit in new creative ways and this just shows it. :hug:

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don't go to bed mad.............stay up late and plot your revenge!!
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~TheLoneFool Feb 2, 2009, 4:48:11 PM
thanks~ that is actually a quote from Ecclesiastes where the emo king dude decides to make a book about how meaningless everything is from... well everything ._. he somehow feels the need to list EVERYTHING as well xD (something I clearly find funny in a sadist way...)

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One day the dreamers died within us
When all our answers never came
We hid the truth beneath our skin but
Our shadows never looked the same (All That's Left - Thrice)
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~TheLoneFool Feb 2, 2009, 4:48:28 PM
thanks smiley :)

--
One day the dreamers died within us
When all our answers never came
We hid the truth beneath our skin but
Our shadows never looked the same (All That's Left - Thrice)
:iconthelonefool:
~TheLoneFool Feb 2, 2009, 4:49:43 PM
thank-you so much edo~

--
One day the dreamers died within us
When all our answers never came
We hid the truth beneath our skin but
Our shadows never looked the same (All That's Left - Thrice)
:iconsmiley975:
~smiley975 Feb 2, 2009, 4:53:50 PM
no problem ninja just promise me you will keep writing stuff because if you don't i will die of a boring life D=

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don't go to bed mad.............stay up late and plot your revenge!!
:iconthelonefool:
~TheLoneFool Feb 2, 2009, 5:17:11 PM
reaaaaaally... O_o um okay xD I want to keep writing and hopefully improving and appreciate your feedback.

--
One day the dreamers died within us
When all our answers never came
We hid the truth beneath our skin but
Our shadows never looked the same (All That's Left - Thrice)
:iconlookingatthepieces:
~lookingatthepieces Feb 2, 2009, 5:57:25 PM
That's okay. It happens. ._.

--
"When you're bored why not do something you can't do just because you can?"
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